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#1 hip cat

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Posted 23 August 2011 - 04:57 PM

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harley weir - nicole maria - slayground - wicked fate - fbees - ettudis - neverlands - 99mockingbirds - nyxthea - olmes - claws & fangs - emmelia

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#2 Caraphernelia

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Posted 23 August 2011 - 05:12 PM

-runs in and claims first post-
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I'll be back to edit


edit; Woooah. happy2.gif finally back to edit! And lemme tell you, i didn't think it was possible to improve so muhc in SUCH a short period of time! Your style is so pretty! and soft and amazing and grawr! Share yo secrets please! <3 I looove your chapter images! I can't do them to saaaave my life. At all. dry.gif And that first set of icons is to DIE for. Srsly. I don't know how you dooo it. th_cry.gif

Your colouring is so amazing. wub.gif And those sigs! phwar!

Keep being amazing ♥

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#3 insomniatic

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Posted 23 August 2011 - 05:26 PM

second! smile.gif -will edit later-

hi marney! you've got a gorgeous gallery. I really like the way use textures. Your second banner just flows really well and the textures in the third banner work really well. The second chappie has to be my favorite thing in here, though. I like that it's so bright, but at the same time you've managed to keep it soft. smile.gif if that makes any sense tongue1.gif

anyway, lovely work and looking forward to more!
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#4 invidia

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Posted 24 August 2011 - 04:05 AM

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
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Marney your gallery is so pretty <3 your coloring is soft and special and i love it so much!
my favorite things in your gallery are the banners because they are so unique!
i love you so much and i hope you'll keep making beautiful things for me and for everyone else here in TDA


love you so much!! <333

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#5 quixotic

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Posted 03 September 2011 - 04:47 AM

hello! happy2.gif

i don't think i've ever dropped by your gallery or congratulated you on becoming a junior last month.. but here it is now tongue1.gif
congrats on being a junior, you really deserve it! i think your gallery is really, really lovely!
you have some very gorgeous graphics, i love +this banner!
your style is so amazing, keep making more lovely graphics! biggrin.gif

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#6 hip cat

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Posted 03 September 2011 - 09:19 PM

thanks so much to everyone happy2.gif
you're all really helpful and kind


#7 toxicx3

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Posted 15 September 2011 - 03:47 PM

Hey Marney! Becca Here smile.gif

I was going through my old messages, and saw one from you, and realized I hadn't checked your gallery in a while...and my gosh Woman! Why do you have to be so darn talented biggrin.gif

Seriously Marney, your graphics never cease to impress me smile.gif

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#8 hashtagponcho

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Posted 18 September 2011 - 12:24 PM

I really love you. Marney, let's get wed.
Your banners are so beautiful and different
to other ways of doing them I'm just like wub.gif
looking at them. I love how naturalistic you have
your current icons as. Not over done, just simple
and really, really pretty. You have an original and
natural flair for graphics and I'm glad you're on this
site and will continue to grow.

By the way, I came to your gallery via your sig link
on a post in a lazy lounge thread about favourite names
that made me laugh :3 Ash Ketchum was my first choice
of name for my children too smile.gif
Keeley.

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#9 kaliedescopes.

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Posted 18 September 2011 - 04:06 PM


Omygosh THIS is absolutely incredible - seriously its absolutely beautiful. Who is that model by the way? she looks really captivating. Excuse me while I stalk your gallery for a little longer smile.gif


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#10 hip cat

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Posted 19 September 2011 - 08:15 AM

oh wow thank you everyone!
gahyegu, i honestly love everyone here at tda wub.gif


#11 paper.fox

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Posted 30 September 2011 - 12:34 AM

Marney, I'm here for your critique. Yes, I know, you can thank me later with assorted chocolates and the like.
But for now, I'm gonna be honesty ll the way happy2.gif

Strengths Colouring, composition and texture use are generally pretty good.

Weaknesses Text seems to be... not neessarily a weakness in technique, per say, but I'd say your confidence in text is pretty low as you dont use it much. I'd say the same goes for stock. My challenge to you: make a banner entirely out of stock and text - no people. AT ALL. Check out this banner by !beccasaurus.

What I'd Get Rid Of These are my suggestions:
+The first banner
+The last two CI's
+And I would link the set with your favourite one. As individuals theyre good, but dont tie in that well as a set
I do realise your galllery is quite empty, especially if you do get rid of these, but qualiy over quantity.

My Favourite Oooh... It's close between the sig and the second banner, but I'm going with the sig

My least Favourite The first banner. I don't think the texture you have framing it really ties in that well confusedslant.gif

Comment USE SOME STOCK!!!! BY GOD WOMAN!!!

cough cough

good luck for promos!
Hope I helped.

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#12 hip cat

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Posted 11 October 2011 - 10:53 PM

thanks so much for the crit (and added humor)
it was super helpful! happy2.gif i'm going to clean out my
gallery and i'll certainly take your advice to mind.


#13 niika

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Posted 16 October 2011 - 08:00 AM

Hey hun smile.gif Your graphics are very nice, so soft and pretty and I can already see a style showing through. Your use of colours is lovely as well wub.gif Try focusing on text a little more, however keep up the amazing work smile.gif

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#14 hip cat

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Posted 17 October 2011 - 01:37 AM

Wowow, thank you so much, that was one of the best compliments i've received in months.
Text and I don't necessarily get along, especially very recently - but i'm working on it!
Again, thank you for taking the time to visit me.
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#15 elixirs*

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Posted 20 October 2011 - 01:10 AM

Marney, I would happily set up camp in your gallery and live here forever smile.gif Everything is so beautiful and delicate; your composition and colours are amazing, and I love how much light there is in all of your graphics. I wouldn't worry too much about your text- this and this show exactly how well you can use it.

So even though we've never spoken, just know that I think this gallery is utterly utterly incredible smile.gif
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#16 hip cat

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Posted 20 October 2011 - 05:33 AM

Tasha,
You're so nice, everyone here is so nice gah. Thank you so much
you're way too kind and helpful and i was really excited to see your
lovely little post tongue1.gif I can't wait to see you around tda (you can usually
find me in the spam thread) and i can't wait to see everything you make
in the future.

-Marney


#17 Crowley

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Posted 21 October 2011 - 06:41 PM

Hi Marney! biggrin.gif I'm here with your crit- sorry for the wake, I've been absorbed in actually making things (jaw-dropping.gif) this week more than in crit tongue1.gif
  • which graphic types you need to work on most: chapter images & sigs- because they're the ones where I'm seeing the most need for technique improvement, which I'll just get on to.
  • which technique (colouring, blending, composition, text, etc.) needs most attention: blending- the way you're currently blending in some instances, I believe by putting people/textures on different blend modes, needs some refining. Textures over faces is generally a bad idea- for example, in +this CI, I can barely see RHW's face, but I love the textures in the background- it would just be better if you erased those that go over her face. Similarly in +this, and +this. Having the background visible through faces is almost never aesthetically pleasing, tbh.
  • your strongest piece & why: +this - there are a few texture/face issues, but in general I love the colouring and it has a nicely clear focal point- I would like to see some text though! biggrin.gif
  • any pieces which are holding you back & why:
    +one, +two - for the reasons stated above with blending.
    +this - for the blending above, and also for the very mess composition- blending aside, there's no focal point in this, and there's text placed pretty awkwardly over the girl's face. Also, the blending has interfered with the colouring a bit, making areas that should be dark light.
In the main, I think you just have to work for consistency- your banners are beautiful, really, but the blending in other things will really hold you back- as a general rule, save changing the blend mode for textures, and when you're using stock or people keep at full opacity and 'normal', and you'll rule out a lot of your current problems smile.gif You've got a great start so far, I hope some of what I've said is helpful to you! biggrin.gif

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#18 hip cat

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Posted 22 October 2011 - 07:03 AM

gah! thank you so much! you really helped - i scrapped everything you suggested and i feel heaps better
about it. thank you so, so, so much and i didn't think you were late or anything.
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