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Star
post Oct 3 2009, 03:33 AM
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"It takes more then a wink, more then a drink!"

Hi, my name is Vik smile.gif
I have been making graphics seriously for about eleven months now and posted a gallery for the first time in October.
I use Gimp so any tips for that would be very helpful wink.gif As I am still learning.
CC is very welcome. I permantly have a bad text day!!! mad.gif
I love chapter images and banners (for the moment) and blends and icons hate me! We have a mutual dis-respect for each other, it's sad but true! sad2.gif



Cute award by Violet
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CHAPTER IMAGES




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BLENDS & THINGS



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Challenges
3rd place - The Greatest Song of your 2009 challenge
3rd place - The Mash up challenge
3rd place - Wildwinyan-stock on deviantART challenge
1st place - The Title Challenge Again
3rd place - R.I.P Fred Challenge



"Cause some don't have the patience
Some call me high maintenance "



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Inspirations - Sarah_Bee, FATAL, FedoraDuo, tovsy, Niika, Violet, Royal, .brookeabee, Alora, Ande, SwissMiss, Lady Malfoy, Vany, Colorkiller, Antiquity, MrsLovett, Catastrophe! ClearPlastic (her Chapter images rock!) and many more...
TDA
ashley's awesome image pack
Kristina's Stock image pack
PhoenixAlthor's Super Dooper Spanky Wow Image Pack
Ande's huge pack of OC's and Stock pictures smile.gif
Nuzzy's Graphical stuff image pack by OMG
Lore's Couples & Stocks pack
Panicstrickyn's unristricked stock & lots of it, image packs
Google Images
stock.xchng
SweetandTalented.com
FrontFreak
wildwinyan-stock
RoyaltyFreeStock
TextureKing
CheekyGraphics
Dafont.com
noupe.com
feltbeats.com
Stockvault.net


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Rica
post Oct 4 2009, 05:01 AM
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Hey there!
You've got a nice gallery going here
Some of your stuff is a bight light, so I suggest upping the contrast in some graphics.
Also, go look around for some high quality images - it makes a real difference to your graphics when they're not too blurry or grainy happy2.gif
Oh, and try not to distort your pictures, like in your current avatar. Remember to 'keep propertions' wink.gif
Before I go, here's a few links for you, in case you haven't already checked them out:
Tutorials for Beginning Artists
Tutorial Central
Promotions 101
Optimizing Your Gallery for Promotions
Critique Corner
The Potions Cupboard
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Sarah_Bee
post Oct 4 2009, 07:14 AM
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darn, I wanted first post!!!!!

oh well... SECOND IS BETTER!!! tongue1.gif

HI VIK!!!!!! hiwave.gif

I'm ecstatic you have a gallery!!!!!!!!!!

You credited me in your awesome fabulous gallery? blush.gif you're too sweet!!!! blush.gif

I think you have a great eye for placement!!! smile.gif

Hmm here's a tip I often give with text: think your graphic is a scale. Try to maintain a balance. You don't want everything huge and eye popping or too small, or all the words in the middle or all on one side. You want a balance. And be careful when spacing out letters. Having big spaces between letters doesn't usually work for scripty large fonts. wink.gif

GIMP has no selective coloring like photoshop (you use GIMP right, if I remember correctly?) BUT you will find color balancing layers, fill layers set on different modes can change that!!! wink.gif

I'll be back for certain!!!! Keep up the awesome work! You have an amazing start!!! biggrin.gif
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Star
post Oct 4 2009, 08:12 AM
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Tovsy - Thanks for all the links, they'll come in handy and for the advice smile.gif i have a feeling I'm going to be needing lots of that smile.gif

Sarah - I had to credit you! You've given me lots of encouragement! Thank you for your tips with text - it's really not my friend!

Thanks for visiting biggrin.gif
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post Oct 4 2009, 08:24 AM
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hai, i'm ashley! happy2.gif you have a great start!

for tutorials on GIMPs, there are some awesome ones at the tut central.

you have an eye for placement but the text is something that needs a little work. just keep practicing and you'll get the hang of it. smile.gif also watch out for halos in your banners but other than that great work!

you're really off to a great start, so i can't to see more from you.

-will be stalking-

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post Oct 4 2009, 02:01 PM
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Thanks for the tips and for visiting Ashley smile.gif x
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post Oct 6 2009, 12:34 PM
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Hi Star! You paid a visit to my gallery so here I am! I really like how everything you make it light and happy. I'm horrible with light graphics lol. I really love your Ella banner, it's beautiful I stared it at for awhile haha. Your placement of images is really nice also, I can see that comes easily for you wink.gif I'll be checking back soon!

Ashley
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post Oct 6 2009, 01:43 PM
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Awww, thank you Ardawing, I like my Ella banner too, wink.gif Thanks for visiting. xx
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post Oct 11 2009, 07:47 PM
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VICTORIA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! matrix-glomp.gif


AHHHHH YOU'RE IMPROVING ALREADY!!!!!!!!! biggrin.gif

Your blending and your coloring has gotten so much better within the past week or so!!!!!!!! wink.gif

Can you see the difference between your newest banners and your oldest? wink.gif

Be very careful with text though. When you have longer quotes, put most of the quote in simple fonts like Georgia, Arial etc then amplify one or two words in fancier, scripty, handwritten/whatever non simple text. That generally looks better in most cases...

Be careful in putting text (especially titles) on the far side of sigs and banners... it becomes distracting... wink.gif

Anyways, keep working hard!!!!!!!!! You're doing great!!!!!!!! biggrin.gif

Sarah
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post Oct 13 2009, 12:53 PM
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Awww, Sarah, thank you for your comments!
You've given me so much good advice.
And a great boost to my confidence.

Thank you biggrin.gif x
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post Oct 17 2009, 10:10 AM
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oh my gosh!
i love this gallery sooo much!
especially your banners and sigs (i think those are your best)

the colorings you choose are awesome too!

cant wait to see what else you come up with!
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post Oct 18 2009, 08:49 AM
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Christine, Thanks so much for visiting my gallery, I'm glad you like it smile.gif

Vik x
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post Oct 19 2009, 03:53 AM
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Hey hun! smile.gif I thought I'd just return the gallery comment favour tongue1.gif
I just wanna say i lovelovelove +this banner wub.gif the colouring is soo pretty!
And I love your blends as well. I can already see you're beginning to develop a style! biggrin.gif
One thing to watch out for is your graphics are a little undercontrasted so remember to boost it up to make the POP! wink.gif
keep up the awesome work hun, ily! <3 th_hug.gif

niikaaa<3
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post Oct 19 2009, 07:28 AM
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Thanks for the advice Niika! smile.gif
I'll bare that in mind! smile.gif xx
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post Oct 22 2009, 11:41 AM
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hey I'm here to critique your gallery (I saw your post in the gallery critique area) I'm Brooke.
Uhh, I'm going to critique first by type of graphic, then by individual issues, and maybe provide some helpful hints. smile.gif

Icons - I saw that you think you are struggling with Icons. I can see what you mean. First let me say that your icons are not bad. You have some pretty good ones. The second one on the bottom row is pretty good actually, the image quality is pretty good and the cut is okay. What makes the cut good is that it zooms out and it's not directly on her face. What could make it better would be if you were to move the girl over to the right or left so she's not dead center. The other icons are not as good. The image quality on them is not good so they're pixely and hard to see. Also, pick a coloring style for a set of icons, make it more vivid and interesting. maybe try playing with the color balance of the original image and adding some hues to your highlights and shadows or just midtones. Coloring is all about experimenting. Cuts could be improved by having some close ups, some far aways, some of just random and interesting things. look at Nellie's gallery and Seng's gallery they have some of my favorite icons. This will show you a lot about coloring a set of icons and cuts for a set. (I should really follow my own advice, I suck at icons too. I think the size is awkward)

Sigs & Sets - Whats good... Image placement and blending. What's not so good... Coloring and graphic quality, also text needs a bit of work... The death sig needs some more vibrant coloring... The font is pretty good... just in a different place. Stalk some upper level artists galleries, think the way they think and learn about placement. Also, I need to take a page from my own book here. Chains of love is beautifully composed, and just needs a more vibrant color and for you to fix the image quality. The font doesn't seem to fit and needs to be relocated more towards the middle I think. I love the magic happens sig. My main suggestion would be to move the text down and to the left so it's above her shoulder.

Banners - Okay there are a lot of them so I'm going to hit the main points. Your older ones don't have much of a base. So they seem kindof... bland. The coloring is pale and not cohesive... but your newer ones are getting better. You are doing much better with placement of people and your coloring is more cohesive... monochrome could be your thing... I would have some variety though. Also, if you're going to go with monochrome try to up the image quality and contrast. The text on all the new ones needs a bit of work. again... I'd stalk Susan for this... she rocks the text. Get some ideas about more creative placement and fonts from her... don't steal ideas though smile.gif

Blends - I love your diamond in the sky blend. It's exactly what I've been ranting on that you should do this whole time... so you've got it hun! just use it all the time! smile.gif Uh, the placement is fabulous, the coloring is vibrant, the text is good and you used scriptina.. that's hard to pull off Ahh, I'm so proud of you!


I hope I helped? I hope I wasn't too harsh. PM me if you ever need anything smile.gif

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post Oct 22 2009, 01:33 PM
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Brooke!!!!!

biggrin.gif Thank you so so much! This is just what I needed. I'm going to be using your critique as my bible! I will defo stalk more galleries. Especially yours smile.gif.

I really appriciate all the advice you've given me, thank you.

Vik x
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post Oct 22 2009, 07:14 PM
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QUOTE (Star @ Oct 22 2009, 02:33 PM) *
I will defo stalk more galleries. Especially yours smile.gif.


I promise my gallery is nothing to stalk smile.gif
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post Oct 24 2009, 10:42 AM
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Hey there! I can tell you've improved a lot already... but here are a few suggestions:

You need to work on coloring! That way, your images will pop out and look really lovely! biggrin.gif

You also need to work on establishing a theme of sorts for your graphics.. I notice a lot of them are basically hued one color: green, blue, brown, etc... and they're a bit too toned down/subtle. Work on trying out different styles of banners, especially more colorful and crazy ones.

That said, good luck, and GOOD DAY! XD
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