okay so first off - definitely work on text it's too all over the place and the main text doesn't have a font that fits the mood (something more scripty and less freehand-y would probably work better) and is also kind of on the small side. i think your base composition is interesting but some of the spaces on the banner are left empty and grey and i think it's what's throwing it off - add some of that greener-y or some other stock here and there to make it cohesive (especially on the left side). only major problem with comp is with the biggest guy - his chin is almost cut off and that often looks weird so i'd either move him up a bit or make him slightly smaller
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