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jellybean jones

Member Since 17 Feb 2018
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In Topic: Happy Birthday, Pheobe!

Yesterday, 08:38 AM

Happy happy birthday! I hope you have a wonderful day!!


In Topic: [Misc.] The Disney Classics Screencap Challenge

21 September 2018 - 07:59 PM

In with Alice in wonderland!!!

 

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sm okay!


In Topic: haha. help.

21 September 2018 - 09:11 AM

I think the text is the main issue here--at least from my opinion. Partly, I think because the two large text bits at the top and bottom are slanting in opposite directions, it kind of draws away from a clear focal point--my eyes don't really know where to look and when. The font choice itself is also a bit iffy, maybe something more wispy for your larger text or shrink it down so that maybe 'the prophet' is the biggest text on canvas? 

 

I also think you have so much color you could work with in terms of text that might look a bit better like maybe the lighter purple from the background ? 

 

Of course, those are just my suggestions--I absolutely adore the base you created and the cuts on the models (though I might make the girl a hint smaller as well??)--integrating them with the base you made is a wonderful touch! 


In Topic: Thank you for coming to my Ted Talk

20 September 2018 - 08:33 AM

Hello friend! 

Welcome to TDA! I just got into graphic making like...six months ago? Seven? Somewhere in there, so I'm still relatively new. I definitely recommend the critique section and/or I like to stare at what other people have made to kind of see things that I can improve in my own stuff!! 

Regardless, I'm typically around so if you need help with something, feedback, or just want to scream at someone about literally anything, I'm your girl! 

Another thing to kind of help improve and get you in the groove of things is checking out the challenges for sure--it at least gives me an idea of what to make! 


In Topic: I Challenge Thee - Cycle 44

17 September 2018 - 08:52 PM

I'll tackle this one!

 

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I challenge thee to make a graphic of your choosing utilizing at least three models. They can be the same person, they just have to appear three times.